Monday, September 1, 2008

D-Hall helping Save Water

This article is titled "D-Hall Helping Save Water", JMU is making another effort to conserve energy and water to be more environment friendly. The dining hall discontinued the use of trays to help save more water. This action does not really affect JMU students significantly but it does help save water. This article is not the only one that cought my eye but it sure did leave an impression. My interest in this article is not only based on the actual topic, i really enjoyed the structure of this piece. The first paragraph was very concise and to the point. The rest of the article supported the thesis very well. There was plenty of clear evidence throughout the rest of the article. This article was well written; however, there were a few minor flaws but they did not ruin it.

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